I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea hub and my teacher is Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Ngarea. Thanks for sharing your animation which is really well done. I think you just need to check if you showed the route as the one that Abel Tasman actually took?
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Ngarea. Thanks for sharing your animation which is really well done. I think you just need to check if you showed the route as the one that Abel Tasman actually took?
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