I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea hub and my teacher is Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I like your theme and If you open a chocolate shop oohh yeah I would buy so much. Also I love your design and yeah and you bet i would go crazy ^﹏^😉😁 -Freya :3
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I like the colourful design of your poster. The wording is a little bit hard to read - maybe you can change the text colour to a lighter colour.
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ReplyDeleteI like your theme and If you open a chocolate shop oohh yeah I would buy so much. Also I love your design and yeah and you bet i would go crazy ^﹏^😉😁
ReplyDelete-Freya :3
thxs freya
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