I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea hub and my teacher is Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wow - writing a rap for Dad is a great birthday present. Hope you are submitting this for the Fathers Day Competition. Glad you like your dad's jokes. Mrs Fox
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
That is a very special rap for your dad, Ngarea. I hope that you have shared your poster with Mrs Thompson for the poster competition.
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DeleteWow - writing a rap for Dad is a great birthday present. Hope you are submitting this for the Fathers Day Competition. Glad you like your dad's jokes. Mrs Fox
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