One day i was driving on the road in a 4 wheel car and it's a very bumpy road.I'm in the car with my best friend Kaylynn.The car sound makes vroom vroom.Me and Kaylynn met at the park so i just drove her through the forest.She had her dog in the back.Then we found a lake and the car broke down right by the lake.Me and kaylynn fell in the lake.We found a submarine in the LAKE!. We went in and started the engine.Then...THE SUBMARINE LOST GAS.So we jumped out.Then something bad happened WE GOT CHASED BY JELLY FISH! Me and Kaylynn got stung A LOT ! Then we got out of the lake.I was so scared i was shivering with fear kaylynn said are you ok i said yeah while i was shivering kaylynn said are you cold and i said yes lets go now then we realized that we had no vehicle to go in so we just walked then we made it home. What happened to the dog? asked kaylynn and i said he’s… wroof wroof barked kaylynns dog. MAX shouted kaylynn - Max jumped on kaylynn i missed you. THE END.
Hi Ngarea, I know that you were learning about using punctuation with Mr Cossey. How many did you use?
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