I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea hub and my teacher is Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Ngarea! Wow your art create looks beautiful, you have balanced the picture using a few birds and a hint of nature wonderfully. I like the white background, it adds to the clean and modern feel of your art piece. You writing describes your character in detail, adding in what she has with her gives the reader more of an idea of her personality. Fantastic use of short snappy sentences to make your writing flow nicely. Excellent maths practise, remember to show all your working out so the audience can learn from you. Thank you for another committed week to learning, you are going to be well prepared for next year.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Ngarea! Wow your art create looks beautiful, you have balanced the picture using a few birds and a hint of nature wonderfully. I like the white background, it adds to the clean and modern feel of your art piece. You writing describes your character in detail, adding in what she has with her gives the reader more of an idea of her personality. Fantastic use of short snappy sentences to make your writing flow nicely. Excellent maths practise, remember to show all your working out so the audience can learn from you. Thank you for another committed week to learning, you are going to be well prepared for next year.
ReplyDeleteThank you Whaea sharlee (note this is from my home account not a different person)
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