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Are video games good or bad?
I think that video games are good and bad. It's good because some games have education and learning in it , they can be less anti social and some Can enhance your ability to learn. The good thing about the video games is that you can play online games with different people and make new friends.
Video games can be bad because if you play on a video game for a while it may cause headaches and damage to eyesight. Video games can also make you lazy. Young kids that see violent games will think it's okay to be violent and they may become violent.
Video games are addictive which is still bad because when you get addicted to something you do it over and over and doing it over and over will make you lazy.
Video games can also be quite bad because if you play too much you'll get addicted then lazy and then your eyes will start hurting and that's what causes eye damage and you may get violent attitude from the violent games.
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games good or bad
Kia ora Ngarea, what an awesome start to Online Learning you have had! Great to see you at our Google meets last week. Your writing is well set out, you have your Remember To clearly stated at the top and your paragraphing is spot on! This week for writing I think you should try to not repeat the same word too often, its a tricky one when writing persuasive texts but I think you are up to the challenge! See you Monday!
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