I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea hub and my teacher is Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Great start to online learning Ngarea! I enjoyed reading your writing, it was so interesting when you described the different ways McDonalds made your senses work! When you reread your work check you have capital 'I'. Excellent pepeha, great to hear where you are from. Your maths is clearly set out and I can learn how you saw patterns from the working out you shared. Keep up the great work.
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Great start to online learning Ngarea! I enjoyed reading your writing, it was so interesting when you described the different ways McDonalds made your senses work! When you reread your work check you have capital 'I'. Excellent pepeha, great to hear where you are from. Your maths is clearly set out and I can learn how you saw patterns from the working out you shared. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteThank you Ms Ghent
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