I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Kahikatea hub and my teacher is Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Ngarea! Thank you for another awesome week, you are showing great self management skills as you work through the weekly tasks and participate in all our Meets during the week. You should be really proud of how committed you have been to your learning and our whanau, kia ora! I agree with Tiana and Cruze your writing was a great read. You used short sentences to emphasise how cool, strong and controlled Wonder Woman was when confronted in battle. You also used a lot of describing words to show your audience what type of person Wonder Woman thought she was. Excellent mahi Ngarea.
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Kia ora Ngarea! Thank you for another awesome week, you are showing great self management skills as you work through the weekly tasks and participate in all our Meets during the week. You should be really proud of how committed you have been to your learning and our whanau, kia ora! I agree with Tiana and Cruze your writing was a great read. You used short sentences to emphasise how cool, strong and controlled Wonder Woman was when confronted in battle. You also used a lot of describing words to show your audience what type of person Wonder Woman thought she was. Excellent mahi Ngarea.
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